Journal 9

I think my style used be very wordy and ramble, which exactly what Vonnegut advises not to do. This semester I feel my writing has become a lot more concise and direct. However, I feel that I am able to do so without losing detail and style. I feel the writing I have conducted this semester has helped to grown to be more direct with my writing, though I feel that my writing style is still strong. I agree with the main points that Vonnegut argues. I think he has many valid points on simple mistakes that people make unconsciously.