Journal 4

So far, I think I've been doing pretty good in English 112. I've been able to back up my arguments in papers more effectively. I do so by researching on our library's site, that way I have accurate information, rather than using wikipedia like I used to. I've also learned how to write out annotated bibliographies since I've never had to do it before. I still want to work on adding more vocabulary into my papers, and refrain from run-on sentences. I tend to add words that are unnecessary so I want to work on shortening my responses and making my point clear with fewer words.