Journal Four

This semester I think that I have personally improved on my analyzation skills. I think I have definitely improved in pulling important information out of a certain text and applying it to the point I am trying to get across. I could pick apart a text vaguely and incorporate it into my paper, but now I am able to really dissect a piece of information and find meaning within each piece I find. I would like to improve on my concise writing. I think that sometimes I get a little wordy and lose track of what I am trying to say. I would like to improve on being able to get my message across clearly and effectively without saying too much or too little.