Monday, January 31, 2011
Journal 2
Thursday, January 27, 2011
Journal 2
A close reading is a thorough review of the paper. Our aim is to notice all the striking features of the text including rhetorical, structural elements, and cultural references. The interpretation of the text or passage helps us to find a deeper meaning, hence creating a more connected and effective paper.
Doing close readings of my paper helped me to find the mistakes I make i.e. better choice of words and the missing details. It helped me to understand and correct them effectively.
Asking questions to myself about the repetitions, contradictions, and similarities helped me improve the quality of my paper.
Journal 2
Wednesday, January 26, 2011
Journal 2
A close reading is looking at a specific text and focusing on every single aspect of it. The close reading will help you figure out what the author is trying to say and by what means they are doing this. The purpose of close reading is to help you be able to understand a specific text. It will help you know what is really going on in the text as well as help point out specifics that come off as more important parts of the essay, what the text is stressing. As I began to start the revision process and after looking over your comments I realized that I don’t always provide the evidence that I need to be giving. There is tons of evidence in the book that I can use to help support my ideas and thoughts. But it is up to me to include this. Doing though should really help make my essay much better and help improve my overall writing by including the evidence that’s out there. I’ve also learned that as a writer I need to be more careful grammatically. There are plenty of times where I see that I spelled something wrong or wrote something that doesn’t make sense. So for me as a writer, I need to make sure I make these corrections. Last I learned that sometimes I could be somewhat repetitive. After reading your comments and going over the essay again I found my two introductory paragraphs to both have good information but be very repetitive. Doing a close reading and paying close attention to this stuff, and then revising should help make me a better writer.
Journal Two
Journal Two
A close reading is meant to make the reader do more than just read. A close reading, in my opinion, asks these questions: how does the text make you feel? Does the arrangement of thetext speak to you? How can you relate to the text and the way it is presented? I think that a close reading is meant to make us search within ourselves and really grasp on to how the text affects us.
For Inquiry I, I have already noticed that doing a close reading is changing the way I view text. For my close reading I chose the movie Bambi and as I anaylzed it rather than just watching it, I noticed that a lot of things popped out at me that hadn't before. This inquiry has made me realize how much text does affect me and rather it is in a negative or positive aspect.
Journal 2
As a reader, I believe that close reading is a way of analyzing a text. There are many different ways to analyze a text. If you are reading a book, you could underline or highlight important themes, ideas, phrases, descriptions, and much more, each in a different color to distinguish the various elements. You could also research areas and words that are difficult to understand to get the full meaning of what was stated. It also important to take notes in a notebook and in the margins. If, on the other hand, you are analyzing a visual text such as a movie, there are other ways to accomplish this as well. I find it helpful to view it several times so that you can notice all of the details including important ideas, wording, and themes. You can also take notes as you are watching the movie to help you recall the information and get ideas for you paper. The purpose of a close reading is to understand a text completely. By doing research, taking notes, and various other methods, you can find the full meaning behind the text and learn about how the text has purpose for the viewer in today's world. I have already learned a lot about close reading for inquiry 1 as I examine the BBC adaption of Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice. Having seen this movie probably a hundred times, I still realize that each time I see it I notice something that I had overlooked previously. Now that I am paying attention to close details, I notice different elements about the movie and how they helped to shape my views on gender. Such things as the manners, language, clothing, scenes, and situations all play an important role in gender relationships. These elements have affected my personal beliefs and ideas about gender. Close reading of a specific text is really important to understanding its full meaning.
Journal Two
A close reading is getting down to the minute bits and pieces of a text. The reader examines what the author put into their text such as the tone, repetition, metaphors, alliteration, and most importantly, the meaning. Each person is going to read the same text in a different way, so no one meaning is the correct one. In fact, I believe the more interpretations people have, the better the piece of writing is because it gets people to think, maybe even outside their own comfort zone.
For my Inquiry I paper, I chose to write about Aladdin, my favorite childhood movie and is still one of my favorites today. By doing close reading examples in class, I can examine Aladdin in a totally different way: using gender and stereotypes to talk about the characters and storyline. Critically "reading" this movie will help me get down to those little bits and pieces in order to make my paper stand out. I never thought a movie could be critically "read". But, I would much rather write a paper about a movie that I absolutely love than a book that I didn't enjoy at all, like previous papers I have written.
Journal 2
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Tuesday, January 25, 2011
Journal 2
To me, close reading is analyzing a text. It’s dissecting a text piece by piece and then stating your view on what you feel the author’s message is. Evidence from the text must be used in order to support your idea. I feel the purpose of a close reading is to see if there is a deeper meaning to the text then what appears on the surface. Close reading allows a reader to really slow down and truly think about what the text is trying to say.
As I began to write my paper for Inquiry 1, I realized that not only the words speak in a text, but also, the illustrations can make an author’s message stronger or weaker. After doing a close reading on my favorite childhood book, Green Eggs and Ham, I realized there was a point behind the fun language and colorful illustrations. After inquiry 1, I have learned that if I truly take the time to analyze a text, I can discover a whole new meaning to it.
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Journal 1
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Close reading to me is much more than just reading in general. Close reading is looking at analysis, diction, syntax, and critically thinking. The purpose of close reading is to pull out certain things from a text and analysis why the writer chose to put them in. Asking questions is a key component to close reading to establish a better connection with writer and reader. The purpose of close reading is to go into every little detail and ask why the author would do that.
Throughout Inquiry 1, I have learned many things about my writing and close reading. First, when I close read my picture book Enemy Pie I reread it multiple times and each time I noticed something different from the time before. Whether that difference was in the author’s detail, choice of words, to the true meaning of the story. I played close attention to the interaction of the father and son because I thought that was the most important relationship in the story. Secondly, I have noticed that my writing has become much more detailed and I’m able to follow certain things better. Also, my writing has become much more fluid and flows better from start to finish than normal. Overall, I feel that close reading and working on Inquiry 1 has given me more tools to use as a write.
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Journal 2
Monday, January 24, 2011
Journal 2
Due: Thursday, Jan 27
Thursday, January 13, 2011
Journal 1
Journal 1
A writer is a person who wants to express his views in a manner, which is exciting and attractive to the readers. As an active reader, I am surely attracted by novel writers and their writing styles. This promoted me to write in different styles and hence, express my views in an open manner.
Albeit, I have written a lot free writing to improve my views and writing, I still think I need more practice to write in an attractive manner. Whether it is a business, English class or even leisure writing, it is very important to communicate using the simplest terms and create a visual in the readers mind, thereby griping him in the text.
In the past 2 years, my writing has improved a lot. I hope to further hone my skills this semester. I like to write. Hence, I would like to experiment with new styles, thereby improving my writing.
Journal 1
To me a writer is someone who does it professionally or as a passion. Writing for me has never really fit into either of those two categories. Throughout my high school years, writing was definitely my most challenging class. I never really liked doing it. However, last semester I took English 111. Although I would still not consider myself a writer I would say that I definitely enjoyed it a lot more than I did before. My teacher was able to make me see it from different angles. I was able to relate the art of persuasion back to my major, business. For the most part, writing is something that we do in every day life. I wouldn't consider myself a scientist even though I'm taking science classes so I definitely wouldn't consider myself a writer just because I use it in my everyday life. I write for several reasons. First off, I write to communicate. With technology growing at an exponential rate email communication has become critical in todays world. I also write for grades. Whether its English class, business class or even mathematics, all have required me to write for a grade. These assignment are also to learn though, the most important part of schooling. From this class I hope to enjoy English more and more. I hope to continue learning new techniques that will help strengthen my writing and reading skills.
Wednesday, January 12, 2011
Journal 1
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Do I consider myself a writer? Yes and no. The term writer holds different meanings depending on the person. To me, the term writer means one writes stories or articles for a living. People like Ernest Hemingway and Tolkien are writers. I'm a writer in the context that I've written papers and I will continue to write papers as my education progresses, but it's usually not by choice. The main reason for why I write is to get a grade and pass the class. Though that sounds bad, that's how a series of bad English teachers has shaped my outlook on writing. In this class I hope to achieve a better understanding of writing and how it can be done for a grade,but also somewhat enjoyable at the same time.
Journal One
I write papers in order to pass a class. If I have to pass English 112, I'm going to do all the work that is asked of me to do and write all the papers and do my best on every single one. I need to create well-written papers in order to pass my classes. This may seem like the typical college student response, but I only say it because that's what seems to come across from my teachers throughout high school and during my first semester at Miami.
I know English 112 may seem like just another Miami Plan course that I need to pass in order to graduate, but I also want to enjoy my time in it. My classmates, my teacher, and my effort toward work will all contribute to how well I can succeed in this class. And I WILL succeed.
Journal 1
I consider myself a writer. Writing to me is an easy form of communicating that allows me to express myself through words. I believe that everyone is a writer but certain people are more advanced in their writing or enjoy it more than others. My writing can put my emotions on paper and make me feel like I’m changing someone’s viewpoint if they read my writing, or at least allow them a different perspective. For me personally, I write to earn the grade that I want for my academic classes. Writing for English class can sometimes be enjoyable but I don’t always like every topic. Writing allows me to communicate with anyone and can take the place of verbal communication. In addition to writing for English, I write to family and friends using various technologies. Whether that’s through email, facebook, cell phone, or by mail there are many ways to get my point across.
For this year I’m hoping to accomplish a few things. The first is to develop my ideas and take them the next step. I need to continue asking my self so what, when I come up with an idea. I’m also looking forward to taking a piece of literature and finding an idea and then writing an essay using the text and the idea. I’m hoping to expand my writing skills and learning new technology in this class. I look forward to a great semester.
Journal 1
Tuesday, January 11, 2011
Journal 1
In this class, I hope to find more resources to back up my papers, that way I have a variety of strong and factual information. I also want to learn how to create interesting papers when writing about texts, such as a book or magazine, so that the reader can visualize my descriptions. I hope to build from my previous knowledge that I have obtained from my English 111 class, where I was encouraged to construct my own paper, never having to follow specific guidelines.
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I really enjoyed the writing assignments I was given in English 111 and I hope to be assigned similar assignments in English 112. I am excited to have more in depth topics at hand to write about. I love writing about topics that are new to me. Upon completing this course I hope to further improve in my writing and to think more creatively while tackling assignments. I am eager to get atarted with this course!
Journal One
From this class I hope to gain a more mature analytical thought process when it comes to writing. I hope to expand the writing techniques I have learned from English 111 and be able to apply them accordingly. I also hope to learn how to properly take literature and really dig into it to create a well-written, concise paper about it. I'm really excited for this class and I want to become a better writer and a better analyzer as well.
Journal 1
I think we define ourselves by what we do, either our occupation or the things we do well. For example, a student who plays on two collegiate sports teams may call himself an athlete, or the guy who plays his guitar on the subway may deem himself a musician. Likewise, I know myself by what I have been obsessed with doing for as long as I can remember, writing creatively.
The first time I remember being engrossed by the creative writing process was in first grade. Ms. Freezen, our teacher, asked the class to write an alternative ending to a movie we had watched recently. The fun part of the assignment was discovering that I already had an idea in mind before coming to class: My imagination was constantly running wild, and this was an opportunity to relay the ideas I toyed with in my head in a way that could be understood by everyone.
Most of the writing I do is to better myself in all areas of writing, whether it is creative, analytical, business, etc.; however, my ultimate goal is to communicate. I am fascinated by the human experience and the relationships that give it structure, and I think that it is in sharing our common/universal stories that lead us to a greater appreciation of our condition, as well as develop a greater awareness of others.
For this class, I am most excited for the workshops because that is how I best improve my writing, by learning from my classmates. At the end of this course, I want to feel like I have a firm grip on analytical writing, as well as have more confidence in my style and approach to prompts.
Monday, January 10, 2011
Journal 1
Do you consider yourself a writer? Why or why not? In addition, why do you write—is it for a grade, leisure, communication, work, etc.? What are you hoping to accomplish in this class?
Due: Thursday, January 13
Thursday, January 6, 2011
Welcome!
Leigh